Im olivia.b
I hope you enjoy reading this poem full of similes:
As wet as a fish,as dry as a bone,
As live as a bird,as dead as a stone,
As plump as a partrige,as poor as a rat,
As as strong as a horse, as weak as a cat,
As hard as a flint, as soft as a mole,
As white as a lily, as black as a coal,
As red as a rose, as square as a box,
As bold as a thief, as sly as a fox.
Welcome PDS teachers!!!
12 years ago
Hello, good poem all words made sawnd to each ather. I like it.
ReplyDeleteBye continue posting.
Martina.t 6a
Hello Oli,
ReplyDeleteThe poem is ggreat adn funny!! I enjoy it a lot. But did you invented it! Becuase its great all the similies connecty to each other. I looooove it!
Beluuuuu of 6b
Hello Miss Olivia (jaja):
ReplyDeleteI like very much the poem of similes. One thing I don't agree with it is the part that said: "as weak as a cat" because today my cousin's cat threw herself to my cousin and she scratch her. Well, I like a lot the poem.
Good Bye,
Ramiro Sa.
Y4 students should read this poem as they are working on similes now! A good idea Oli!
ReplyDeleteHi Oli I liked a lot your post it was a very creative idea keep on posting this kind of posts i like them a lot.
ReplyDeletevicky.I
Hi oli this post was the one i choosed because it was the one i liked, it is very interesting!!
ReplyDeleteKeep posting this fun posts!!
Jessi.Y 6a
Hello Oli, I liked the poem that you invented.
ReplyDeleteI will start thinking what I will post.
See you soon!!!
Kisses
Constanza
Hello Good idea of posting a poem it sound very good. I dont know what to post and my time is coming
ReplyDeletegood post martur 6a
HI oli
ReplyDeletethese post was a very good idea you shoul keep posting these caind of posts, I agree with the other ones that said that the post was great
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Carla d